She was getting late for home. It was already nine and the autorickshaws were charging 1.5 times the normal rates. Her friend Shameen was confident of getting a cab. Shameen's father is the cab services manager, and a call to him can solve the situation. But the girls did not want to pester him and instead wait for a little more time.
Sameer, a close pal of both was adamant to drop her home. But their modesty was not allowing to do so. And after all she came all the way to this place on Sameer's request. Sameer had to go in the opposite direction. He did not take those cabs going to his place, just to give her a company in waiting for the cab.
But before the cab could arrive, the phone had rung up and Sameer's wonderful dream was broken. The reality is she never came to that place.
Sameer, a close pal of both was adamant to drop her home. But their modesty was not allowing to do so. And after all she came all the way to this place on Sameer's request. Sameer had to go in the opposite direction. He did not take those cabs going to his place, just to give her a company in waiting for the cab.
But before the cab could arrive, the phone had rung up and Sameer's wonderful dream was broken. The reality is she never came to that place.
7 readers commented:
Yeah baby.... seems like I am not the only dreamer, LOL!!!
That was good writing, but the suspense factor could dealt more clinically.The ending seemed too abrupt. The post should not have ended exactly the movement the surprise is unveiled.
What say?? :)
Hmmm.. thats right.Actually, it was a real dream, so i wanted to keep it authentic.
the whole dream things seems quite unclear.. i didn't get the point.. cud u please enlighten me..
dude. the dream is a real one , and everyone there is real. Can make it public. If you interested , i will tell through some private channel.he he :)
I agree with mohit...you could have streched that a bit with some dramatic revilition of the suspence
I would surely like to know who the girl in the dream was
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